Sun : I'm the sun I shine and glem,
But with or without I'll always be here.
Moon:I'm the moon, I'm
awake when the sun sleeps.
Sun:I have sunny freinds far and wide,
they smile love me,
and love me and love me till night.Moon:I'm the moon people love me,
and love me till morning.
Sun: I'm the sun.
Moon:I'm the moon.
Fuzzhead Starlite
Wow! I am impressed with your comparisons. It's like a two voice poem. I love your beginning, " I shine and gleam." What was your inspiration for this poem?
ReplyDeleteTHANKS,
Deleteand it is a TWO voice poam!
Well written. I like how you brought the sun and the moon to life. Looking forward to seeing more. Perhaps even more about the sun and the moon.
ReplyDeleteThanks mom!
DeleteStarlite
Mom
Deleteyou know I'm going to!